“Ghosts”, a short story by Billy O’ Callaghan. This story is taken from Billy’s short story collection, In Exile.
“Ghosts” is the fourth story of the collection and it moves away from the farming or fishing setting contained within the first three. It is set somewhere in the jungle. The time is war and we see the jungle and the war that is contained within through the eyes of a young soldier. The trauma of the soldier’s first killing is relayed with detailed accounts of the weather and how it impacts on the character’s feelings.
I found the language to be very eloquent for that of a soldier so it prevented me believing the narrator somewhat. However, the killing and the effect it has on the killer does ring true with what the reader might imagine it to be.
War is not my bag, baby so it was a story I wanted to finish quickly. However, the scene is described well and the character’s thoughts on what he had done and how this affected him are carried out well. It is not my favourite of Billy’s so far and that is down to the over eloquent language and description of the weather and the lack of me connecting to the content and setting of the story. This is not to say it is not a very competent story that will hold you till the end.
I love clever titles. This short story has an excellent title, Put down. At first glance, it means little to the reader but as we read on, we see the title refers to the relationship between the husband and wife and the general action or conflict of the story.
We have two characters, Mc Carthy and Brid. Husband and wife, living in rural Ireland. There is poverty and we are not quite sure when this is taking place. The conflict begins when the conflict begins between Brid and her trodden on husband. She wants him to do something that is necessary to the running of the farm but he does not want to do it. By the end of the story, we see that Mc Carthy is so put down that he complies with the worst thing in the world and we can only wonder at what will happen to him after this story ends.
Billy O’ Callaghan is writing about country or rural isolation and the effects on relationships. He is mostly telling us about a relationship gone bad and he contrasts it with a good relationship, the only one that was meaningful for McCarthy. We hear Brid’s voice throughout the story, instructing McCarthy and we get wonderful tastes of the landscape and the weather from beginning to the end.
This story unnerved me, it was powerfully written especially the climax, which I won’t reveal. Worth a read and does what every good short story should do-a problem, a reveal of character and a further reveal at the climax with a nudge to the future for the character.
I get sent books, which is most excellent as I do love them!
The majority of them are longer pieces of work, novels or novellas. I got a new novel yesterday, which is great but it makes me feel as if I am abandoning my first love of short stories! And then, I focus on reading the novels and actually do forget the short story collections, of which I have quite a few to get through!
So, to focus me and give me a challenge, I’m going to read and blog about a new short story every day. It may very well be that I blog about a full collection in a week and a half or read random stories from all over the bookshelves in my house. Either way, I hope it brings me into focus and it promotes the brilliance that is the short story!
I will be starting off with the short story collection, In Exile by Billy O’ Callaghan and his story “The Body on the Boat” tomorrow. And there is to be no cheating on my part. Therefore, I am setting myself rules. No bulk reading of stories. No bulk and pre-dating blog posts.
It is impossible to keep up with the amount of excellent literary journals and magazines available on the net these days but the Irish or “Swift” edition of Literary Orphans Magazine was always going to hook me in!
I’ve been in touch with Mike from across the way in Chicago and want to thank him for detailed answers.
First of all, great idea and fabulous Irish themed issue! I know that James is from Ireland but where there any other reasons that Literary Orphans was determined to run an “Oirish” issue?
Mike Joyce: The inspiration for the Swift issue of Literary Orphans Journal hit me while watching Tim Pat Coogan and Robert Ballagh speak at a panel discussing Seamus Heaney, shortly after the great poet’s death, at the IrishAmericanHeritageCenter in Chicago. The conversation at one point turned to Tim Pat Coogan’s latest book, The Famine Plot.
In the USA, in most public school history texts, we’re taught that the famine was a direct result of the blight and because the Catholic Irish “over-bred,” and now there’s 30 million Americans with Irish surnames in their bloodline including 12 Presidents; now there’s Celtic romance novels and that dancing danced here by people in California with an Enya fetish and that’s that.
No textbooks mentioned the shiploads of grain and foodstuff leaving Irish ports as armed guards watched over. They didn’t mention Nassau Senior saying the famine “would not kill more than one million people, and that would scarcely be enough to do any good.” I didn’t read anything about property taxes and citizens without votes. No textbooks brought up the idea that there is a ghost of the famine haunting the current Irishperson’s mindset, influencing population rate, economy, and more.
I realized at that moment, that unlike what my textbooks glossed over, the cultural inheritance of Ireland would not. As the conversation veered back to Seamus Heaney and his inclusion in many anthologies as a “British” writer, and the pressure to separate his public self from any Irish foreign politics in order to become acclaimed for the skill he so clearly had–it made me consider the need to showcase Irish writing for what it was, not linked with British or post-colonial or American lit. Irish writing that reflected the complexities of modern Ireland. Irish writing with no theme. In many ways, even though we describe it as a “themed” issue, it’s really a non-themed, themed issue… if that makes any sense. There is no general vibe, no motif, no genre at work in these pieces. Roughly 75% of the contributors are from Ireland, and many of the others are directly writing about a trip there or an experience with someone from there that impacted their lives. This issue is a mash-up of Catholics, Protestants, historical pastures and future dystopias, current present and current past, fantastic “hags” and gritty cement cities, but no general theme to speak of.
I contacted James Claffey, Fiction Editor of the journal. James was present when we did a similar issue, Maria Tallchief, highlighting Native American authors. I brought up the idea to him, and he was right their with me and chomped at the bit. Personally speaking, I wanted to explore the idea what it means to be Irish and to be a writer today. I wanted to get my thumb on the pulse of the mindset. I wanted to learn. I wanted to create a big-tent and I wanted to see the Irish come into that tent and lay it out, lay it all out on the line.
I saw that in spades.
Tell me about how you met James Claffey and how the idea for Literary Orphans magazine came about?
MJ: Literary Orphans Journal was the result of the writing group called ‘literary orphans’ that I created about 4 years ago. Scott Waldyn (our current Managing Editor) and Leanne Gregg (Fiction Editor alongside James) were involved in that group. By the time 2012 rolled around, it was becoming more and more difficult for us to meet in person, so I was charged with creating a way for us to communicate online and workshop. I created a journal instead.
James Claffey was published in that inaugural issue–that was the first time I met James. One year later, we were expanding staff and James Claffey became our second Fiction Editor.
Tell me about your background in writing, reading and the general arts.
MJ: I received my BA in Rhetoric from the University of Illinois at Champaign-Urbana in 2009. I believe writing comes from the heart, that the only reason to do it is to share your heart–not to make money. I’ve shared it in a fair few publications over the past few years. I measure writing’s success in influence, not in dollar signs. But this, editing, this is what I do. It’s my identity. I’m the guy that does Literary Orphans Journal.
Let’s keep it Irish, who do you rate as literary brilliance in the Irish literary scene?
MJ: James Claffey! After James, everyone we published in this issue. For a celebrity writers? Roddy Doyle has been a constant inspiration to me since I first read his work 5 years ago. Really excited and hopeful to see more from Darragh McKeon, too, All That Is Solid Melts Into Airreally hit hard.
What were you hoping for when you put the call out for the Irish issue of Literary Orphans? What did you know you would be rejecting straightway?
MJ: Anything that was “oirish” as you put it, anything that was inauthentic, anything that mistook a Hollywood idea for Ireland for the reality. We were hoping for honest writing. We were inundated in it. When James put out that call for submissions, he hit the nail on the head. To be honest, there were only a very small amount of oirish pieces, the majority of submitters knew exactly where we were coming from. Choosing was not easy, I don’t envy James. There is a reason this is our largest issue compiled.
Do you believe that everyone can write or is there a level that certain writers reach that they cannot overcome?
MJ: I think it all depends on why you write.
Write to make money and win chicks? I think we’d have to ask Dan Brown and Stephenie Meyer how to succeed at that one.
Write to share your heart? Then it’s a constant fight to pick the manacles of your brain. To me, good writing comes when the author has attained a certain mental state, a certain mental level. That level is a strange mix of intense self-analytics and dumbing yourself down into a torpor to write without any inhibitions. The best writing only works if it’s a haymaker–if you can throw that punch with no regard for what happens afterwards. We all have it in us. I think if you can achieve that state, you’re halfway there. The rest is all learned; applying techniques to convey the emotion you want so passionately to share.
Which book is on your bedside locker?(I.e. The one you are currently reading, there may be a few if you are like me!)
MJ: Ah I see you’re after my own heart! I have 3 books going right now: Last Exit to Brooklyn by Hubert Selby, Junkie Love by Joe Clifford, andLions, Remonstrance by Shelly Taylor.
Have the more traditional story telling in Ireland like Frank O Connor and William Trevor any place in the literary scene in America and Ireland? What can we learn from these authors?
MJ: I’m probably not the best to speak on this. I am (both as a writer and reader) very much a fan of plot-driven narrative. I think that’s something we can take from Frank O’Connor. I think that sometimes literary writers get caught up in that technical side I mentioned earlier; it’s the literary equivalent of a long, noodly, masturbatory guitar solo that by the end of which the only person left on the floor holding a plastic cup is the writer’s significant other.
In Ireland, we have some fine and very established literary magazines like the Stinging Fly and The Moth that showcase new and established writing talent. What would be your favorite literary magazines?
Birkensnake, The Penny Dreadful Magazine (love those guys, Cork based), Ninth Letter, PANK, Midwestern Gothic, many many others.
I love the fact that the Irish edition of Literary Orphans referred to the past of 1916 rising and the present day meeting of The Queen and our President in its editorial statement. Would Literary Orphans see the anniversary of 1916 as a potentially powerful time to celebrate difference and the evolution of the arts in Ireland? It may give you an idea for a future issue!
MJ: I’m already prepping to ask James to do this by sending him small gifts to soften the blow of the huge amount of work I’d be asking of him. It’s the 100-year-anniversary. I don’t see how we can’t do it.
Have you ever been to Ireland? If so, where and if not, what type of symbols and characters come to mind when thinking of Irish literatures?
MJ: I have not! My vacations these days are to “rust belt” capitals like St. Louis, MO and Providence, RI to give you an idea of my budget. As soon as I can afford it, I’ll be over there.
Symbols and characters from Irish writing? Hm; the transformation of that annoying nonverbal brat Stephen Dedalus from Portrait of… to the more guilt-ridden and mature Stephen we meet in Ulysses, Yeats as a character all his own, Malone and his pencil in Malone Dies, Sinbad and matches from Paddy Clarke Ha Ha Ha, the portrait in The Picture of Dorian Gray, that florin in “Araby,” the geography of Ireland is pervasive and I get a different yet unified flavor in many books and poems from Irish literature. Geography and place are really important to me and my writing, although my geography looks very different. Still, green fields and stone fences, nighttime hazy brickwork forests, those are things I think of when I think of what Irish writing has given me.
Thanks to Mike for this, go to www.literaryorphans.org for the latest issue of the Irish Literary Orphans and for details on how to submit. I’ll have James’ answers up next week so do come back!
I started Lorrie Moore’s new short story collection Bark after finishing half of Ann Enright’s “The Portable Virgin” and feeling a bit perplexed and not loved up towards that particular collection. I am hoping that The Portable Virgin is something I will come back to.
Now, I needed a short story that suited my reading style and taste. Entertaining, with funky characters and situations with endings that makes you miss the story and the people in it.
Lorrie Moore is an American fiction writers best known for her short stories. Nuala Ni Chonchuir originally alerted me to her, on the Arena programme on RTE Radio 1. I actually would agree with her review and opinion of the collection but please, read on!
Debarking is the first and strongest story of the collection. A lovely, long short story, which I do enjoy most. In this story, we see Ira, a newly divorced man coping with the stresses of dating after a marriage breakup. I use the word “stresses” in a tongue in cheek way as this story is brilliantly witty and shrewd, most time it is simply comical. Ira starts to date a “mentally challenged” women called Zora who had a teenage son who she seems to be almost having a relationship with. Ira is an observer to all of this madness and he goes along with it all as Zora is quite the hot looking woman.
The details that Moore includes within her character are excellent. The characters of Ira and Zora are thought out, living and breathing and this is what adds to the entertainment of it all. The story ends with what seems to be a recurring theme of the intrusion of television in the characters lives. The invasion of Iraq featuring heavily throughout. This story was my introduction to the world of Lorrie Moore and I found myself very excited about reading the reminder of her stories.
My other favourite was “Referential”. A sad, raw story about a mother and her mentally ill son. Of course, there is the added hassle of the mother having an unconnected boyfriend thrown into the mix. We can see that there is a growing separation between the mother and the boyfriend of ten years. The mother is seeing it too and that’s the sad thing. You can read this story online for free at http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/books/10668431/A-new-short-story-by-Lorrie-Moore-Referential.html
The remainder of the collection write almost exclusively about relationships but especially about couples who are divorced, having marriage troubles or illnesses/ struggles in long term relationships. The characters therefore were of a different time and age to me so it was hard to relate. If you take this collection as an amusing observation on love and its complexities, you will do well with it. Many critics have said that Bark was too short with only 8 stories. But, I was quite satisfied as after reading through the collection, Moore’s style and content remain the same no matter what. For me, to carry on reading another 10, I may have became restless. I did enjoy the way she looks at life and the quirks within but the subject matter and characters were alien to me, at times.
The Write Show will be performed live from Carlow Central Library, and broadcast on KCLR on Monday June 9th at 6pm. Tickets are free.
After releasing its first anthology in 2013, WhatChampagne Was Like, The Carlow Writers’ Co-operative have turned their attention to writing for broadcast.
Working for six months with one of Ireland leading radio writer-producers, John McKenna (whose credits while at RTE include numerous contributions to Sunday Miscellany and his award-winning documentary series on Leonard Cohen), this ambitious collective have assembled an eclectic programme of material for performance in front of a live audience (you) for broadcast by KCLR a few days later.
Contributors include Phelim Kavanagh, Bev Carbery, Rozz Lewis, Simon Lewis, Pauric Brennan, Derek Coyle, Maressa Sheehan, Clifton Redmond, Jonathan O’Brien, Brigid Johnson, Betty Ryan O’Gorman.
Expect drama, storytelling, music and poetry from a beguiling and hugely talented group, the occasional stumbled line, and some performances of chaotic humour and engrossing pertinence.
This initiative is funded by Carlow Arts Office in partnership with Carlow County Library Service, KCLR and Carlow Arts Festival.
Of course, the name itself is going to attract writers, readers or people who like to sit and think or chat. We spotted this immediately and along with its beautiful, crisp white exterior, it tempted us in.
Inside, the colours of white and berry give it a fresh and thoughtful place to sit and drink coffee. The room is lined with bookcase of second hand books, all priced E3.90 to avoid confusion. I bought a barely used book which I saw later in a bookshop priced at E18!
Want to give this place a go?
Atmosphere: 4/5- Music is lightly playing and there are two couches along with many small tables and chairs which are not too tightly packed in. The staff are extremely welcoming and they leave you alone to sit, read and write. The cafe is decorated beautifully with artwork of books and reading and even the cushions are book themed!
Other Guests:4/5 Apparently, the day before a local poet has visited and treated the customers to an impronto poetry reading! The other guests were made up of couples and tourists(mostly German and English tourists) They were not too loud and did not intrude on my reading. There was no evidence of families or young children in the cafe but I saw many young families look at the name of the shop and carry on by. Children are great, just not when reading or writing!
Features: 5/5 Wifi and books. It has to get top marks for these two features.
Food/drink-5/5-Homemade cakes, lunch, soup along with locally made chocolate bars with sugar free option.
Overall:I would definitely mark this as a place to go to if you are in Kinsale and fancy a chilled out but lively atmosphere with honest food and books! I would love to see the cafe expanding their book genres as most of them were romantic fiction. Sections on poetry, short stories and fiction would be great. Also, would love to see more local events like open mics or poetry readings taking place. This cafe could really showcase the literary talent of the area.
I woke up this morning very early and for some reason, I felt compelled to listen to the Book Show podcast. I don’t listen to it enough and I should so I’ve subscribed to it now through iTunes and am going to listen to it on way to work.
I listened in to Mike Mc Cormack of Forensic Songs and Colin Barrett being interviewed. It was a brilliantly, intellectually but accessible and honest chat about the short story form. Colin and Mike were hard to distinguish! Mike spoke aboutow he finds there are less experimental writers using the short story as a vehicle. He mentioned Beckett as one of his favourite, experimental short story writers and recommended the Lost Ones short which I will get a hold of.
Now, I’m sitting with coffee and the papers, reading over reviews for Lorrie Moore’s short story collection, Bark and George Saunders oldish(2013) short story, collection, Tenth of December.
I felt sad as I’m enjoying a couple of novels at the moment for review but I miss my short stories so I am going to purchase the Tenth of December and read it along side my longer and loved novel form.
Now, back to the papers. >
The Sunday Times EFG Short Story Award prize shortlist is out and it closes on April 4th when the winner will be announced at a posh ceremony in London. Junot Diaz won it last year with Kevin Barry, hero winning in the year before.
I’ve downloaded the shortlist to my kindle for 2 pounds sterling! I’ve just finished the first three stories and all are exceptional and moved me me in different ways.
The first one is Anwar Gets Everything by Tahmima Anwar. the Booktrust website has a lovely space for each author and story. Check it out a http://www.booktrust.org.uk/SundayTimesEFG
In this story, a construction worker in Dubai lives to regret quarrelling with his fellow colleague. It is beautifully and poetically written and tells us how awful the situation is. The title and ending are genius. When I read this, I pronounced it my favourite but then I had to read on to the second and third ones!
The second story shortlisted is Othello by Marjorie Celona.
The story is set in small American town with the narrator thinking back to his teenage years and his step-brother who has autism. I loved the voice and style of this, seems as if it was easily written but that’s a compliment as I know it wasn’t. Autism seems to be a feature of fiction recently. Not sure why. Either way, the characters are all real and touched me but wasn’t to convinced by the ending and hoped for something else. I did really liked this tough especially the way it was told. A female author capturing the male, isolated voice brilliantly.
the third onem and my favourite, so far is Nirvana by Adam Johnson.An oddly touching scifi story of love between man and wife. This story, behind all of its geeky references to google glasses, android, drones, holographic images of the President, is primarily a love story and how a husband feels when his wife is facing the end. Really powerful and my favourite out of the three so far.
I will read the rest over the next week and post back. You can vote for your favourite but don’t do it unless you have read the stories and read my reviews, of course.
I keep saying it but historical fiction is not my bag, baby. But, I keep reading historical fiction and some of the time, I like it. Like it not love it. Maybe, it’s the stark reality of what I am reading. Within fiction, I can fool myself into an imagined world whereas with historical fiction, it’s too true for me.
Audrey Magee’s new book form Atlantic Books is called The Undertaking and it is a grim, grim story about a man and a woman who meet, fall in love and have a pretty awful time of it. It’s set in World War 1 and we are introduced quickly to our main characters, Peter Faber, a German soldier and Katharina Spinell, a German woman he has never met. They get married to each other; a marriage of convenience that gives a ‘honeymoon’ leave for Peter and a pension for her should he die on the front. They fall in love but Peter has to return to the war front ten days after they marry.
The rest of the book flits between Peter’s awful time at war and Katharina and what she thinks is her awful time at home during the war. Though, in fairness, she does go through some bad things towards the end of the book, without giving too much away.
I liked this book. Well, it might be hard to say liked as its content was depressing and the ending even more so. But, I appreciated the story and the way it was told so simply even though the themes were massively important.
It drives home the pointlessness and evilness of war on every page, there is little happiness to be found. It would interest people who like their fiction to be raw and gritty. Audrey writes super well. Her dialogue stands out as it is so sparsely put together. She gets the reader to believe so much in a character that I understood Katharina and her view towards Jewish and Russian people even though I disagree with her. I could relate to the historical motivation of them. Because, she writes the book from the German point of view, we can comfortably look back and feel how great we are, how smug. Interesting and what historical fiction aims to do, I am supposing, though I am no expert.
I also liked that the book never gets into the boring details of war, weapons, bombing and history. It reads like a piece of fiction so it is to be recommended for lovers of historical fiction and general fiction, though it is very hard hitting and does not flinch from the reality of what happened.
The Undertaking by Audrey Magee is published by Atlantic Books here.