Review:The sisters-a short story by Patrick Mc Cabe(Dubliners 100)

dublinersThis short story, The Sister, was written in response to Joyce’s short story of the same name. It is written by Patrick Mc Cabe in his unique and sometimes meandering writing style. I do find his stories somewhat difficult to get into as they flit from one character/event to the next with no easy lead in. Was this a risk to open this collection with?

 

At first, I found it impossible to see a connection with the original story but by the end, it is clear where Mc Cabe was aiming for. One of the major themes of Joyce’s The Sisters story is that of the family or the homestead. Mc Cabe’s story shows a family in the middle of a conflict, their chimney has gone on fire! It shows the aggression between father and mother with the child, the narrator of the story, in the middle of it. He too is in paralysis. In Mc Cabe’s story, the young boy is numbed by his parents arguing in front of everyone and he goes off into a dream sequence. By the end of the sequence, the young boy is “returned to himself..untilted…ossified.”

As in Joyce’s story, there is a huge emphasis on death and Mc Cabe spends time detailing what would happen to the body if it were to be choked by the smoke and fire. The character has a Joyce-like epiphany where he realises the truth about his family. It takes a fire or a death to do this.

Though, at first I could not see the link as I read on and digested the ending of Mc Cabe’s story, I think that he wrote a very clever and subtle take of Joyce’s The Sisters. One that will provoke thought and debate.

Next story is An Encounter.

Dubliners 100 is published by Tramp Press and contains 15 reworkings of James Joyce’s Dubliners.

The Sisters-a short story by James Joyce

To commemorate the anniversary of Joyce’s Dubliners, his short story collection, Tramp Press have released a new collection. Dubliners 100- a reimagining of Joyce’s classically brilliant collection. I can only imagine the turmoil these writers felt when they were asked to take on a story by Joyce and make it into their own. Thomas Morris, the Editor of the new Dubliners 100 discusses this in his Introduction:A Strange traffic of sorts. I will blog about this later as this editorial introduction is a short story in itself.

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The Sisters-a short story by James Joyce

I have read this story so many times. First, when I was in U.C.D. and then so many times since then. The first thing that struck me was the oddness of the character of Father Flynn and the uncomfortableness of the relationship of the narrator with him. Words like paralysis stood out immediately and shaped the rest of the collection’s theme and feel for me.

The story, at its most basic level is about the narrator, a young boy and his friendship with the soon-to-die priest, Father Flynn. The story ambles along towards the “climax” where the young boy sits with Father Flynn’s sisters after viewing the priest’s corpse in his house. The sister tells us about the priest’s state of mind and how it had began to diminish over the years, leading to his death.

But, this is not just entertainment. Joyce is propping the rest of the collection up by using the word “Paralysis”. The young narrator thinks of this word when he thinks of the priest along with other seemingly strange words like a gnomon, a term for the part of a sundial that casts the shadow. Writers often leave details out so the reader can make the connections themselves and in this way, Joyce is pointing to the puzzle of the story, its details and suggestions and the whole of the novel. But, he will not give us the answer. So, when we get a hint towards the way the priest makes the young boy feel uncomfortable, we get only that hint and we will have to think more to what it might mean in terms of the whole.

The other interesting thoughts this story provokes is one of religion, mental health, death and its ability to disconnect us. These themes of paralysis or disconnection with life i.e. a death feature throughout the story in its characters and its actions. We are left inb no doubt to Joyce and his feelings on religion as in much of his writing. Religion paralyses or breaks people. Will it break the narrator? I don’t think the story points to this but the fact that the narrative is given through the first person, it allows us to hope for that the young boy is detached and can come to his own reasoning on religion and whether the priesthood is for him or not.

In Dubliners 100, Patrick Mc Cabe has been handed the honour of opening the collection with his version of this puzzling story. I will review it straight after this, once this story has been allowed to sit.

Dubliners 100 is published by Tramp Press and is being launched in Dublin on Thursday, 5th June 2014. More details here http://tramp.ie/product/dubliners-100-2/

 

Dubliners 100 by Tramp Press arrives today and I am over stimulated and excited!

You have read the blog post title and seen the photo!

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I haven’t been this excited about a new publication since Kevin Barry’s “Town and Country” and I miss him much. Come back, Kevin…

Maybe, it is the fact that Dubliners IS the short story collection of forever.

Maybe, it is the fact that it is edited by very lovely and nicely spoken, new lit-crush, Thomas Morris.

I am unsure but I do know that I am tearing into it and the original Dubliners right now! Sleep will wait.

The Wedding Day:A short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

The Wedding Day:A short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

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I am aware that this collection was published in 2008 but some of the stories could have been written way before this time. This story, The wedding party has an old-Ireland feel to it. A girl and boy get married under protest. She is pregnant so the priest and parents are involved.

I loved the characters in this. Subtle and true. In fact, I enjoyed the story, all of which was set in the pub with some flashbacks. The ending was overbaked for me, too well packaged for the reader. The last paragraph could easily have been left out and have hit its impact. Great idea for a story. The characters have played on my mind since I read it.

This story comes from the “In Exile” short story collection by Billy O’ Callaghan.

 

Deliver us from evil:A short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

So, far this is the longest story in the collection In Exile and I liked it. I think that O’ Callaghan really suits the longer, short story as there are plenty opportunities for character development and setting as a theme.

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creative commons

This story is set in a time of The Troubles in Northern Ireland. The story shows great knowledge of this time and focusses in on one character, Joe and his relationship with top IRA leader, Dan. With well crafted use of flashbacks, we see how the relationship and issues of the past between the two men have led to this point. We then get a brilliant scene in a pub where Joe and Dan meet after many years. Joe is left with the dilemma of whether he will take on the job that Dan is offering. Well, actually Dan isn’t offering the job. If Joe declines the job of killing loads of people on a tube in London., then Joe will not leave the bar alive. This is the conflict of the character and story, resulting in a satisfying narrative ending but with a sense of anxiety for Joe.

This is my favourite story so far and good to see the leap from the rural setting of the farm or the island to the urban and more gritty one of London and Belfast.

My 4 pet hates when I read a short story

First of all, I need to pre-empt this with the fact that I know I am not a published author or an expert on the short story. All I am is a lover and avid reader of the short story. I am obsessive. And I love reading the books suggested by this virtual veterinarian app to my pet.

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I want to write this post as a reader and not as a person who is trying to write, if you understand. These are the 4 things at the minute that I notice at classes where I am a student or in short stories published in the last while that have started to frustrate me.

1

The use of exclamation marks. I despise them. I don’t use them and don’t expect to see them. The narrative should be able to convey warning, excitement or shouting without using this very annoying mark.

2.

The word “grin”. I hate this word. It reminds me of the Famous Five stories. Have you every heard anyone using the word “grin” in conversation? Answer is no. Smile is better or try using your expertise as a writer to show the person is “grinning” through dialogue or exposition. Today, I read a story that used it twice in a paragraph. Yuck.

3.

The twist that attempts to trick the reader. The writer gives a glaringly obvious hint to something that I always figure out straight away and then groan and then get to the end and tell my husband that I told him so. Boring. As a reader, I am not in the business of being tricked as if the writer is much cleverer. Ireland’s Own love these type of stories. I don’t so maybe, it is a taste thing. I am being kind. Revelations that are built up slowly though imagery and characters are much better. A quiet yet powerful ending does it for me.

4.

Irish myths. The second I see Grainne Mhaol, Fionn, Ferdia, Cuchulainn etc enter the story, I am switched off. It is lazy and not cool and I’m not interested in an Ireland of this type. Again, this could be a taste thing and I have only read of one author who pulls off this type of thing-Eilis Ni Dhuibhne. Go, ask her how she does it.

My ranting is over. i hope I don’t have to add to this list in the near future. Feel free to ignore me or comment. I love a good debate!!!!!!(I used a couple of exclamation marks to show you how joyful I am.

Dubliners 100 out on 7th June

I am ultra excited, man.

I love Dubliners. We all do. Studied in uni and loved ever since. Tramp Press and Commissioning Editor, Thomas Morris(he is Stinging Fly’s new fiction editor) are publishing a reinterpretation of James Joyce’s short story collection on the 5th June at the bargain price of €15.

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They have also got some pretty funky and cool writers on board. So far, on that list are Donal Ryan, John Boyne, Eimear Mc Bride and Paul Murray. To make things even more brilliant, these writers will be in conversation with Thomas Morris down at my(I am claiming this festival as I practically live next door to Borris House. Almost) Festival of Writing and Ideas in Borris House on Sunday, 15th June. The Festival runs on 14th and the 15th of June and so far, the lineup is kicking the other two “biggest and bestest” literary festivals in Ireland.

I am saying no more other than buy the book and go to Borris.

Eveline, Donal Ryan’s clever reversal of Joyce’s original tale, will be published in The Irish Times on Saturday, June 7th.

Dubliners 100 will be published by Tramp Press on June 5th, priced €15.

All that jazz-a short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

All that jazz-a short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

This is a piece of flash fiction. It spans barely 5 pages and focuses in one moment of a young, Polish woman in a bar with a couple of stereotypical fat Irish men leering over her. The Polish lady is contrasted with the other stereotypical scantily-clad young women as the Polish lady is dressed in a jumper and jeans, strangely enough seeing as she is in a bar.

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I think there is meant to be a twist at the end in that we find out she is a single mother but I am not sure of the point of this fact and in fact I am not sure of the whole point of this scene or woman.

I welcome the character of a Polish lady in Ireland and it is interesting to get into her head and thinking about Ireland but we are not left with any new observations about Ireland or Poland. As a piece of flash, it works well enough.

A killer story-a short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

A killer story-a short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

My husband thinks this story is very clever whereas I don’t like these types of stories. I cannot go into much detail as I will give away the enjoyment of the story for you!

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A killer story is a type of short story, as I have said, that I just don’t like. Other people do and will marvel at it. I like subtleness in an ending and I don’t want to be tricked.

It is a very short story that has a great start and development, a fresh idea and  a future for the character suited to a longer piece.

In other words, I was interested in what would happen to the narrator next but the ending lets it and me down. But, read it and make up your own mind! Very different from the tone, style and endings of the other stories I have read in the collection.

That is all I am saying.

A killer story is taken from In Exile, a collection written by Billy O’ Callaghan and published by Mercier Press.

In Exile-A short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

In Exile-A short story by Billy O’ Callaghan

I had reached the 5th story in this collection and although, the previous story “Ghosts” moved away from the themes/setting of farming, rural isolation and island life, I was becoming a bit tired of those themes too. However, it moves quickly away from that tried and tested Irish short story setting to an urban one, which is good, I think.

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In Exile tells the story of a man who has more or less escaped from his native, irish-speaking island of Cape Clear. Cape Clear brings up images of an American island, for some reason! The narrator lives with his wife, Jenny in their very urban house in Dublin. He misses his life yet he rejects it. One day, he comes across a past member from the island and this is where the story begins. It flits between island memories and present day in Dublin. I really liked this. I was able to see the life on the island and the cruelties of it alongside the torture that the narrator feels every day and even more so when he comes up against his past. This story is my favourite so far. A believable narrative voice with a real, human story.

It ends the way a good short story should. With the reader wanting to know what happens in the character’s life yet knowing if they did, that the story would then be a novel.

In Exile is a short story that is from Billy O’ Callaghan’s collection of the same name, In Exile and is published by Mercier Press.